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== Nae-Née - Birth Control: Infallible, with Nanites and Convenience for All == | == Nae-Née - Birth Control: Infallible, with Nanites and Convenience for All == | ||
| − | Stephanie, with some reluctance, I approved your submission for [http://www.isfdb.org/cgi-bin/pl.cgi?837745 Nae-Née - Birth Control: Infallible, with Nanites and Convenience for All]. The synopsis is far too long and detailed, please make it a synopsis, not a screed. The "note" for the pub is not appropriate. Move it the author's name; you can fill in birth date and place there as well, along with the language you write in. Finally, put a $ in front of the price; after all, it could be £ or C$ or ¥ or € or some other currency. [[User:Biomassbob|Bob]] 15:57, 19 May 2021 (EDT) | + | Stephanie, with some reluctance, I approved your submission for [http://www.isfdb.org/cgi-bin/pl.cgi?837745 Nae-Née - Birth Control: Infallible, with Nanites and Convenience for All]. The synopsis is far too long and detailed, please make it a synopsis, not a screed. The "note" for the pub is not appropriate. Move it the author's name; you can fill in birth date and place there as well, along with the language you write in. Finally, put a $ in front of the price; after all, it could be £ or C$ or ¥ or € or some other currency. I rejected your other submissions along the same lines, they all had the same mistakes. Love to have them in the data base, so please try again. [[User:Biomassbob|Bob]] 15:57, 19 May 2021 (EDT) |
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Nae-Née - Birth Control: Infallible, with Nanites and Convenience for All
Stephanie, with some reluctance, I approved your submission for Nae-Née - Birth Control: Infallible, with Nanites and Convenience for All. The synopsis is far too long and detailed, please make it a synopsis, not a screed. The "note" for the pub is not appropriate. Move it the author's name; you can fill in birth date and place there as well, along with the language you write in. Finally, put a $ in front of the price; after all, it could be £ or C$ or ¥ or € or some other currency. I rejected your other submissions along the same lines, they all had the same mistakes. Love to have them in the data base, so please try again. Bob 15:57, 19 May 2021 (EDT)